Why do authors complain about writing summaries of their novels for the book jacket?
Because it's TOUGH. Waaaah!
A good blurb captures the voice of the novel. It entices the reader without giving too much away.
We're starting to edit my fourth novel On Best Behavior (The Conduct Series #3), and we need the book blurb for a press release.
Here was my first effort at writing the blurb:
On Best Behavior is the third and final book in The Conduct
Series—romantic suspense with a psychological twist. Following a pardon by the
Governor of Illinois, ex-cons Sophie Taylor and Grant Madsen are free to pursue
their love. But planning a wedding is never easy, especially when the Russian
Mafia want you dead.
Grant fights the forces that have hurt his loved ones by working
undercover for the FBI to infiltrate the Russian Mafia in Chicago. Sophie dives
into swimming with Grant’s nephew Ben, and into a career as a psychology
professor. This time it’s Ben’s turn to heal through therapy sessions with Dr.
Hunter Hayes.
Too bad the Russians aren’t their only threat. Grant’s father Enzo
Barberi discovers it was Grant who thwarted his plan to break out of prison.
Enzo possesses an overdeveloped sense of vengeance and ****. It’s unclear who will kill Grant first—the
Russians or his Italian family—until Sophie scrambles to save her fiancé. Can
love win over evil?
The good news is that blurb writing does get easier with practice. The bad news is that this blurb felt disjointed. So I turned to my trusty editor Jessica Royer Ocken for help. Her first suggestion was to eliminate the clause represented by **** because it gave too much away. Whoops!
Here is what Jessica came up with, which I like much better:
Following a pardon by the Governor of Illinois, ex-cons Sophie Taylor
and Grant Madsen are finally free to pursue their love and the life that lies
ahead for them. But planning a wedding is never easy—especially when the
Russian Mafia wants you dead.
Nevertheless, On Best Behavior—the third and final book
in The Conduct Series—finds our favorite couple moving forward,
despite the odds. Grant now fights the forces that have hurt his loved
ones by working undercover for the FBI, and he has infiltrated the Russian
Mafia in Chicago. Sophie dives into swimming with Grant’s nephew, Ben, and into
her career as a psychology professor. Thankfully, now it’s Ben’s turn to heal
through therapy sessions with Dr. Hunter Hayes.
With so many things going right for Grant and Sophie, it's too bad
the Russians aren’t their only threat. When Grant’s father, Enzo Barberi,
discovers his own son thwarted his plan to break out of prison, his
overdeveloped sense of vengeance flares to life. As Sophie scrambles to save
her fiancé, it's impossible to say who will kill Grant first—the Russians
or his Italian family. Can love triumph over evil? Are hard work and a pledge
to be on best behavior ever enough?
Once again, author Jennifer Lane brings a harrowing tale
of romantic suspense with a psychological twist, and it's sure to leave
readers breathless.
Authors, how difficult do YOU find the blurb writing process? Readers, what types of blurbs are your favorite?
And soon we'll work on a book cover, too. :-)
On Best Behavior
Comments
Yet, they are essential: they encourage the browser to open the book for a look-see.
A short hook of a sentence apart from the body of the blurb works very well to incite my interest when I book-shopping.
You've done a very good job crafting yours though, with the marvelous Jessica's input, of course. I still love your hook line: "planning a wedding is never easy—especially when the Russian Mafia wants you dead." And I agree w/ Roland that sometimes a one sentence hook is more effective for me when browsing books.
TA DAAAA!!!
Terrible, I know, but ohhh so tempting lol